PANTOUM OF LOVE :-)

here i lie with you alone
in the dark starry night
thinking about our deep love
that with all odds can fight


in the dark starry night
the moon smiles down upon us
thinking about our deep love
it casts an envy shadow on us


the moon smiles down upon us
with its tranquility and calmness
it casts an envy shadow upon us
because the love it experienced is less


with its tranquility and calmness
the night bows its head before us
because the love it experienced is less
as our love is more and there's in it no fuss


i love you with the depth of my heart my angel
and the love the rest experienced is less
like the moon or the stars or the night
with their tranquility and calmness


PS : my 1st Pantoum....wow !!!.i.didnt realise i could try this form of poetry....!!!